


Giving it at least 6.7 excluding the way the the art was handled giving the story more depth atmosphere and left me feeling amazed. The emotional expression of the characters makes the story more believable and helps it feels more real. The author and her assistants did a very good job at capturing emotions such as loneliness. It doesn't have the deepest story now that I look back at it but the way the story was handled is why it gets a high rating. However the story took itself seriously and character development was handled nicely. You'll find characters boasting about themselves not too often but still the characters are very flirty excluding the female lead. But some things were dragged on for too long but was fixed with comedy. It was enjoyable and kind of funny and some parts were a little unpredictable.

Something are skipped over, others are useless, even the characters, nothing is really dealt with in depth, most is superficialīut why it loses points has nothing to do with the Mary sue part. Plotholes: which is the thing I hate the most personally. Lack of motivation: all the story really sum up to "revenge", but I found it somewhat cruel and unsatisfactory at the end Basic fights: almost all the fight end in one second with the FMC beating everyone in one panel, there was the potential to have reaaaaly cool battles. You pass from and arc to another without having the time to realize or to feel really attached to some characters that are quickly skipped over Predictable and rushed plot: there are not major plot twits, also because you can catch on them really quickly. They fight and cry together, none is better than the other. Their connection and understanding of each other is incredibile. Romance: the main couple is the highlight of the story, I think. Intense: once you start reading, you cannot stop, you must know what comes next World: the "vampire" set-up was interesting, a new point of view on a theme that was abused a lot over the years, but nothing really original btw. I found myself crying a lot, especially at the end I was a sobbing mess (lol) Representation of trauma: some of the side characters story are really well written and, with the art, you can feel their sadness and despair. Strong protagonist: the FMC is like the strongest in the world, and she's always improving, but sometimes felt like she's was even overpowered, like nobody can compare to her Incredible art: I looked at the panels for minutes because I was amazed by it, really incredible Overall I really liked it even if it was fast-paced, in fact sometimes is good that the story isn't dragged out, but it must not at the price of a good plot. If you like a story with a badass female lead, this is for you, but you must also like lack of consistency and a rushed plot.
